Reviews for Waiting
knrvDZHDdE chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
this was delightful. a good touch of humour and a nice juxtaposition-as an immigrant currently getting a green card I can only sympathize with the endless lines of paperwork and red tape. loved your, "go to hell, literally." reminded me slightly of a joke I'd read in the Reader's Digest in my parents' bathroom: a couple is seated in an extremely crowded and bustling restaurant. the woman checks her watch and says, "Your sister is probably giving birth by now." the man, frustrated by the agonizing and glacial pace of the server, replies, "she wasn't even pregnant when we got here."
CoffeeBreak chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
This story is awesome. I really enjoyed it. Great title, great dialogue. I hope to see more like it...or maybe a continuation?
Beckyboo218 chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Haha, very cute, I loved it.