Reviews for A Talk With Fate
NeonTime chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
It's cute and fun and I liked it. I can't imagine it will continue, but since I think we can all guess at the next part that's acceptable.
KELEVRA chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Well, I loved it.

I actually almost choked to death laughing at one point, but I think I'll be okay.

So it would seem that Fate really knows what she's talking about. Perhaps some of us should take her advice to heart.

Don't worry, I feel fine. No lawsuits, I promise.

Imparfait Pourtant Parfait chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
I hate how this story is inconclusive, but, at the same time, I also like it. I really like all of your one-shots, but the one from Neil's POV seemed kind of repetitive because nothing new was really added. I don't feel as if that much of his personality was revealed by adding in this second part. However, I really enjoyed the first part of the story.

You're really good at capturing entire stories in one-shots, so keep on writing!

BTW, I disagree with Emma, yellow is the best color in the rainbow (besides maybe blue :]).
blurrylights chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
I really loved this! It was really different from other stories, and interesting. The hook ending was a great technique to use, even though I am really curious about what would happen next. Also, the title was really good too..i was expecting something different, but this was surprising in a good way. Nice job. :)
productioncity chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
aw, thanks for writing back so fast! :)

I read 'A Talk With Fate' about five times

already, I think, and I'm basically

in love with the characters - is that

wierd, since they're fictional? hahaha.

actually, when I said if I knew what

the ending was, it'd be different from

what I expect, I said it because the

story itself was so unpredictable,

that if I assumed something, there

still would be another 99% chance

that the ending I thought it would be

would be wrong. wait, did that make sense?

hahaha! :)

anyways. it's cool to see

a one-shot that had a diffent point of view

from it.. you're really a talented writer!
productioncity chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
great one-shot with a twist!

it's so different from the

happy-ending or the dramatic

finish. although I really want

to know how the story ends,

I think that if I knew, the

story would be different from

what I expected :)

so, kudos to you on this great story,

and keep writing, please! :)
Sub Rosa Vehement chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
God, I love this story. I read it before, without Neil's POV and it was great. Even better with!

Is that all though? I'd love for them to get together!
duckliy543 chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
how does he feel

its like there's no emotion he notices but he doesnt do anything about it! aga! but i lvoe it!
HelloLovely chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Uhm, I was just wondering if there was anything else with this story cause it was just sort of left hanging. Not even a hint of what might happen. At all.
LiME-GREEN-CAPES chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
ah! there should be more, i loved it!
xbrunnettex0 chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
okay i just read "a talk with fate" and WHATS WITH THE ENDING. lol like i read it and i get to the ending and im like maybe theres another chapter.. and THERE IS NONE. WHAT HAPPENS.. he doesnt feel the same way?
jaded.darling chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
i enjoyed this story a lot but i can't believe we were left not knowing what happened. my face completely dropped at the end as if i just found out my dog got hit by a car. well not quite as bad, but u get the picture. so please, please i hope this isn't the end of the story!
duckliy543 chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
wow this is soo good.

but it leaves me with alott of questionss

i love oneshots like this

keep up the good work.
Make Love Not War chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Wonderfully written. That had better not be the end of it, or I'll have to... do something drastic. xD Seriously though. I HAVE. TO KNOW.