I am confused

You have to make this into a full blown out story. It's to amazing to stay a One-Shot.

hey that was nice! I wish it had developed more, but as a one-shot it felt complete.

there really wasn't much (anything?) wrong with it, it totally deserves more reviews! maybe if it catered to more action or had a twist, it would draw a bigger reaction from a potential audience. but yeah. its kind of sweet :) I wish William could come back!

Well done. Kinda short, but really nicely done. I hope to see more of this, soon!

Brilliant. This was brilliant. That's all I have to say. Amazing, keep it up!

This was beautiful. The flashback fit the story so well and like a dance the story flowed easily. I enjoyed reading this. I didn't see any grammar mistakes and it was an excellent read. Very well done.

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PS. Would you mind reviewing my newest story: Opening Pandora's Black Box? I'd appreciate it very much.