Reviews for Fighting for Plums
Chasmal chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
I love how you use the plum tree as a way for the girl to achieve "friendship" with the rest of the class. Even though she can capture "that most perfect of plums", it means she has to leave everything else behind, and she's guilty about it. It's also awesome how you describe letting the real you out, and it's "tender and ripe for the assault." It connects perfectly to the plums. Good job!

~Chasmal
cynth ballerina chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Oh! They are so cruel. And it's almost as if the main character grows considerably, or not at all.

Poor girl, I just want to shake those kids out of it. I really liked it though. The plum idea throughout the story was nice.