Reviews for Trivial
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
It's funny how we do that a lot. I watch time a lot and then I'm like "I could have been doing something, instead of just watching the clock". Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life.

~Twilight Starr~
thesarcasticdreamer chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Oh, I've done that so many times and it makes me mad... at myself that is.

I like all of your poems, they really are like windows into the everyday life of humans. Speaking of humans, they are very human, they show us how we all are, and how similiar we are can be underneath out exterior.
Scevity chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I like it. I actually like all of yours. It's true, we all waste time on stupid things. Human nature I guess. Bleck.
Lissa Wyga chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
very interesting. You've captured that feeling perfectly in this poem. I loved it!