Reviews for low battery
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Original work. Great job!

Twilight Starr
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
it's really scattered and changes quickly from one concept to the next,

but it's sort of fitting for the thought, i think
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I really liked the way this was written. I didn't understand it, but I enjoyed the uniqueness of this piece all the same. You've got a really unique writing style and its refreshing to read. Well done!
Definition chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
I love the idea and the imaginary is intense. You have a very unique style :)

Thanks for the review :)
lyl chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
nice :) i sort of like the disjointedness of it all, not that it isn't understandable to some degree. but i guess only the poet really knows what they're writing about ;)
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
You have the most interesting writing style I've read in a long time. Keep it up and thanks for the review.
orginal name chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
That was really cool. I really like the flow-of-consciousness style of writing. I especially enjoyed the end where the flow ebbs a bit,(low-battery, journey is cancelled) before beginning again at the very end, showing how it continues. I really enjoyed it.