|Reviews for False Expectation|
| Basara chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
"...I am still first place overall." It could be taken literally or interpret another meaning. Another intriguing and great haiku.
P.S I know what you mean about the fragment in the last line. Thanks for telling me.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Thought-provoking... It sounds shallow to me on the surface, but I think I can interpret it as having a metaphorical meaning. Intriguing.
| Gray Angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Very nice short one, and very true.
| openmouthblues chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Interesting, for a haiku.
I'm still wondering what it's about.