Reviews for False Expectation
Basara chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
clearly understood...

nice...
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
"...I am still first place overall." It could be taken literally or interpret another meaning. Another intriguing and great haiku.

-C.N

P.S I know what you mean about the fragment in the last line. Thanks for telling me.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Thought-provoking... It sounds shallow to me on the surface, but I think I can interpret it as having a metaphorical meaning. Intriguing.
Gray Angel chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Very nice short one, and very true.
openmouthblues chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Interesting, for a haiku.

I'm still wondering what it's about.

-Icicle Tears