Reviews for Falling Through
Swordlily chapter 12 . 7/1/2014
very sweet story,
I am a bit heartbrocken about the end where ritter dies but i liked the story nonetheless. The magical tools of "the Emily" Neil gave ritter were really funny.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
Aw, that's sad that Ritter died :( but it does make sense because Ritter could hardly be expected to come to Neil's world, and Neil obviously couldn't stay there forever...
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 12 . 1/5/2012
cute. i don't really like that it was a frame story. but oh well. nicely done. great pacing. thanks for sharing!
Ben Tramsami chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
I was about to go to the next chapter, but I thought I should let you know how awesome this is only two chapters in! Now that you know, I am eager to get back to reading.
Chatte-Rouge chapter 12 . 12/9/2010
Aw sadish and cute ending! xD

Love the storyline xD
jag finns inte chapter 12 . 8/29/2010
ooh me likey, tis very interesting and please dont get annoyed at me for commenting too much...
jag finns inte chapter 11 . 8/29/2010
-sobs- that only made me slightly more emo than I already am
jag finns inte chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
I have been waiting for that kiss to happen for such a long time
jag finns inte chapter 8 . 8/29/2010
WHOOHOO someone can actually use contractions! Its a miracle!
jag finns inte chapter 7 . 8/29/2010
if everybody ends up dieing than I am going to be irratated with you
jag finns inte chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
I love how the people talk, it makes me giggle
jag finns inte chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
the characters are so amusing! I feel bad for Neil it must totally suck to be in that situation...
theauthor94 chapter 12 . 7/5/2010

You are amazing!

I was glad that even though Ritter "died" Josh was kinda supposed to be Ritter.

But Ritter isn't real and...

Anyway! This was awesome!
Ryushinoreza Naosegawa chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
...hehehe...its so damn kawaii...!
frogs of war chapter 12 . 5/11/2009
At least Neil didn't do the "Connecticut Yankee" thing and leave Ritter behind. When you first introduced Josh, I wondered if Neil was more his type because Neil (and Emily) seemed so sure he would say yes to her.
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