Reviews for Broken Smiles
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
It's so hard, that feeling of guilt. Of knowing nothing will ever be the same because of what you've done. I think this poem expressed that very well.

Sorry that I've taken so long to review. I was in Orlando, Florida for a week.

Anyway, great job and God bless!
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Having a small amount of insight I can only say that I hope the troubles being faced will ease with time. Your rhyming scheme is well structured and conveys a lot of emotion that gets the reader thinking, as most of your longer poems do. Your opening line is an interesting one, and I pose a hypothetical one to you: Are the broken smiles and tears truly forgotten if somebody else remembers them and not the person they were intended for? Sorry, I know that was seriously random, but I guess my email will explain a little more regarding my thoughts. I must be honest in saying that I think this is one of your better poems and really like it. Having said that, I'm sorry that pain had to be incurred in order for such a raw and well put together poem to come about. Good work!


Lost in A World of Pain
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Great imagery. I love the third line. As always, nice job.