Reviews for Unwanted Feelings
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I kind of had to read this over again. Just to let the words sink in. Because I can't believe how absolutely true it is. Blows me away. Good job.
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Again a very descriptive poem that is filled with raw emotion. I know I'm using this line a lot, but I can't seem to think of anything that can accurately describe what is being written than that. You last line is my favorite and I think that it is absolutely brilliant! A very good poem, and I'm adding it to my favorites list. Hmm, it seems to me that your writing is starting to get a lot in my favorites, oh well. Hope you don't mind! Good work! Again, sorry for the emotions that were felt and experienced that made you feel this way. You're not alone as regards this feeling, if that's any consolation. Just remember, that you're not either unwanted in entirety, but only for a short time by the person in question. Sorry for this rubbish review.


Lost in A World of Pain
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Ouch. Terribly relatable, for a change. Good job, anyways.