Reviews for Tattered Wings
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Short and sad. But the amazing thing is that God can repair broken wings. Sorry, I don't mean to preach to you. I'm just so in love with Him right now. I can't even express to you this feeling. Great job.
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Aww. So sad. A feeling of hopelessness? Vey thought-provoking all the same. Keep up the great work. ] -Sara
ilovebooksandmusic chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Ah, thought provoking. Interesting poem; I really liked it.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
No, you can't. But is repair possible? One hopes so.

Nice metaphor.
PJ141991 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I don't know what to say really. This seems more like a poem. At first, I was about to say, TRY HARDER NEXT TIME. But the more I read this piece, the more I actually like it. For it's size, it actually has a lot of hidden value.

I think it's saying, "You can't do everything, an example would be flying." I'm not sure really, but that's how I intepreted it.

You really shouldn't be posting this in Fiction, because it isn't.

Thanks for the read, even if it only did take 3 seconds-

The PiJiddy.