Yep I'm back! lol

I'm so liking this fic so far, then again I think you did something to me. I just realized I tend to like all of your fics! lol

Ok, the fiancee sounds damn cute, Kay I like, and call me crazy but I sort of liked the black night, the one Kay's age! lol

Anyway great start, great chapter and I'm sure great story!

This story was really good!

Yes, it really is epilogue. _

Lol, omg, everything in here is so cute. But Izu should had given her another peach gummy or tried to hit her and then make Summer mad. That'd be just... hilarious!

Yes, I really enjoyed reading, thanks. It really made my day... although it's midnight now. But you get the point. I really liked it.

NnK.

Prologue? Isn't it an epilogue? O_o

Vent window. Nope, don't know.

I was, like, "omfg! Izu!" And now it's a bit okay, phew. Hey, she woke up... she went to sleep and then she was awake again, inside the castle. Uh, okay that's the part that irritates me.

NnK.

"I’m going to brew some tea.” Lol, Rose talks funny for an old woman. It doesn't have to do that she's in the country, does it? And the brothers, lol. Omg, Toby and Todd. Why aren't THOSE the names of the brothers? O_o Well, just a random thought there.

“Aw, this is so cute!” Todd exclaimed.

Lol, that's what *I* would say! *rofl*

NnK.

Basically, though, Summer's life... just now consisted of Izu about only... only Izu. Mostly Izu. Like two short paragraphs about her life before she was kidnapped. O_o Just wanted to be a smartass, sorry. *begs*

NnK.

That's so cute and everything. Tetsushi lived a good life, though, I gotta admit. But it's so sad. And um... pokemon, ha-ha.

Black roses, I'd love that. If only there were such things in this world. I'd only like it cuz there will be no other black flowers, though. Yeps.

NnK.

Omg... you're kidding me. That's so sad. It's so cheesy, but omg... ;_; Couldn't they just both live? It'd be more fun to see them fight it out when Summer's free. *sighs* Tetsushi is a nice guy, come on... It's Izu who has issues. Big ol' bastard. Ugh.

NnK.

Oh gosh, that was... a bit fast. Hm, so that's how it is between Izu and his gf. I see.

Tetsushi really loved the Princess? Aww, that's so sweet. She couldn't let him go. At least Tetsushi didn't hit her like Izu did...

NnK.

Lol, stole a hoodie and donated it to charity? Wtf kind of a world is this? Lol! *rofl!* I'd never have any weird dream like that. Oh wait, it was a dream... haha. XDD I had forgotten that it wasn't true. Oma, that just cracks me up so badly!

Finally, we see a nicer side of him. But man does he really have to hit her all the time like that? Hmm...

NnK.

That's so random. I know, Izu, choose, you meannie! Or I will smack you for the Princess! Hm, breakfast... but it's almost midnight atm for me. Are you kidding? T_T

NnK.

"Love is a strange and funny thing." Are they going to fall in love? But he's such a bastard. I hate Izu. _

I'm a person with patience, and I know that love stories take a long time. If it's love at first sight, it's just... lust. Wait, Summer or Kay or... the Princess thought Izu was hot. She was lusting for him for a moment there, lmao.

Peach gummy. Is that gonna be the cheesy thing that pops up into the story? Aww, it's so cute! I

Izu? Man... and he's hot. That's awesome. But he's as much of a bastard. 16? Man... I'm older than him! WAH!

Peach gummy, I love peaches! I want a peach gummy... too bad hot Izu isn't here to give me one.

He's taken? Man, Izu has some taste... she's a slut! I can't believe he's hitting Summer or Kay... her name's Summer? *faints* Okay, I keep forgetting, the names must be in the Western version, first name first, lol. Whoopsies.

Izu hit Summer! Bastard! Slap him back, that bastard! GR! I will not stand for a girl getting slapped and hurt like that! To hell with him!

Okay... calm down. I mean, at least you've finished the story.

NnK.

Hey this so cool story i ever read it...Wow twins were separate and meet again in. Wow...I'm so happily that Summer and Izu were engaged now...i wonder what is her wedding to be like? I love your story :D

ok. well, I personally don't like cuss words, but, in this case, I will let it slip, because it fits summer's personality. Here is my sis, who is a writer herself, and she'll tell you some suggestions.

Hi. I only read the first chapter, but it was very good. I really like that she's got personality. She doesn't rely on the man to save her. It's a really good start, just keep playing around with ideas and things. Also, make sure you keep the story in the same tense.(like past and present tense)

OK. She doesn't want to critisize it too much. I think that you may want to...um...keep the story going along. It's going really good. And also make sure that you read over it. You do have a few like typing mistakes, but not many. And, like my sister said, try to expeirement with things. If they work, then good. If they don't, then oh well. Yep. That's about it. Keep going, cause it's realy good! hehe. ok. that's all. bye now.