| Reviews for You're The One I Want |
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   g.na chapter 22 . 8/15/2008 WAH! you killed her! so sad but it was really sweet... in my opinioni don't like how sad endings end the story BUT it was really well-written it was awesome btw, that Edward is a real asshole i feel so sorry for Emma :( |
| XxTheSoNotMainStreamxX chapter 22 . 4/5/2008 OH MY FRIGGEN GOTH! That's so sad! She DIED! I can't believe u killed her. I LOVED THIS STORY!1 IT'S MY FAV ON HERE! I Feel sorta hate-ful to Edward though. God he can be a bastard! |
| xjennnny chapter 22 . 3/26/2008 such a cute yet sad sotry illoveit |
| Elizabeth07 chapter 22 . 11/15/2007 I liked the story, but, had a few complaints.. Just little ones.. Your misspellings sometimes made it hard for me to read... But, otherwise, I loved it alot!.. I also wondered about the character, Lucas, Edward had said in his mind that Lucas saw Emma as more than a friend.. But, you never clarified later whether he ever did.. I thought at one time that maybe Emma would chose neither brother and go for Lucas instead, because he seemed level headed and genuinely cared for her. Anywho.. Thanks for hearing me ramble. |
| blackcloud1986 chapter 22 . 11/3/2007 OMG that was so sad i cryed i felt my hart breake but it was really really good |
| pinkfluffyoranges chapter 22 . 10/30/2007 Wow this story was deep, real deep. I thought it would be a lighthearted bit of fluff, boy was I wrong. But it was an amazing read, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. You did a brilliant job, and I hope to read more from you in the future. |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 22 . 9/30/2007 This story actually made me cry.. It's fantastic. I can't even describe it. WooW. You're an awesome writer. You and your story should go on my favorite. |
| TheQuilAndInk chapter 22 . 9/10/2007 Holy crap i'm crying right now because that was so emotional I wasn't expecting that wow wow wow oh my that was so sad it was truly amazing great job :] |
| Catherine chapter 22 . 9/9/2007 AH no i didnt want emma to die...so sad -cries like a maniac- ( |
| Halani chapter 22 . 9/9/2007 Oh my gosh! That was soo sad! The ending was great, but still sad where she died. . . Wow is all I can say. Congrats on a great story filled with much emotion. |
| TheQuilAndInk chapter 21 . 8/23/2007 wow Congrats on finishing the story it was Awesome totally amazing sad, captivating, happy, emotions all over the place, real good stuff :] So i'm guessing you might be making another story with edward's life because he left or continue this story because it had a great ending hah she's a blond but i feel like you could definitely continue if you want to just a thought:] Anyways great job can't to read your new stuff |
| Halani chapter 21 . 8/22/2007 Aww what a good ending! Although I kind of feel bad about Edward finding Emma in that situation... BUT, I feel happy about Emma and Evan! D Awesome, awesome awesome! You did a really great job and deserve a round of applause *sounds of applause* Congrats! Ooh, now I may read some of your other stories... I dunno, maybe! Anyway, Congrats on the big finale! D Halani |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 21 . 8/22/2007 yay they finally got toehter...I'm happy...your story is great...i love it |
| TheQuilAndInk chapter 20 . 8/20/2007 wow wow wow this chapter is amazing so deep wow I really hope she decides to be with evan she loved him all along please update soon dang those cliff hangars :] |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 20 . 8/19/2007 poor emma..i hope she pick Evan..I dont like Edward he's jerk..I want to see Emma and Evan get together in the end |