Reviews for Wake Up |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yup ! It is ShockinglySweet :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was cute. It was perfect. It was romantic. Realistic. Even though the sentences looked choppy, each word had a bigger meaning. I want to hear from you Isabella.x |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was so cute and sweet! i loved it, amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD. It's kind of freakishly scary in the way that they both "stalk" each other, but it's cute. Cute, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. It was just so sweet in my opinion. The characters' attitudes were perfect: elaine wasn't all snobby just because she was popular and the boy wasn't all seriously deprssed enough that he wanted to die because he had no friends. They wer both great. In fact I like it enough that I'm going to fave it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this is how a girl thinks, eh? I'll have to keep that in mind. For some reason, I felt embarrassed when I read this. (Maybe it's because I'm a guy, and I just don't get girls. . .) Probably, though, because the narrative seemed so realistic it felt like I was actually hearing someone's thoughts. This was a really good one-shot, though. You spelled 'bury' as 'burry', and I think there was another error or two, but I forgot what it was. Anyway, good job. |