This is an amazing story. Short and cute.

no offense but you kinda lost me on the last chapter and it felt a bit rushed

I think the pace was too fast but the plot was definitely a 10/10.

Hahaha the tone makes me giggle. Great story. Odd and a little bit crazy, sparked with awesome.

I love your character descriptions at this point! Regan is a very interesting character. Just a note on how you could things a little more realistic: you can have Regan still be slightly hung over so that there is a plausable reason for her impaired judgement

it really is a lovely prologue :)

LOL! I did not see the ending coming. Somehow, instead of hating the unhappy ending, I simply love it.

Is something finally happening? Sory, it's just the story seemed a little slow and uneventful to me.

AWSOME!

so is she happy? if not, then leave!

I love love love the flow of this! I love how the wording is so concise, like there's a pattern or rhythm, or both, to it. Can't wait to keep reading!

The epilogue was good, but I'm wondering if Reggie regrets her decision at all or what life is like now with her demon "husband" ...

The epilogue is really funny. To be honest, I think you have the story in that. I would love to have a story with her and trying to live in hell with her demon-husband. Thanks for writing!

Cassandra

Nice reveal. I think I would have liked to have this element thrown in earlier in the story though. Still a good story, but there wasn't much supernatural elements throughout the most of it. If it weren't for the prologue, I wouldn't have known this was supernatural in nature.

Cassandra

OH wait . .. this story is almost done. Who is this girl? Ek.

Cassandra