I feel that this chapter is completely unnecessary. It's clever, sure, but it doesn't add anything to the plot.

The first chapter starts out hilarious. It's very good, but you do have too many paragraphs. You need to tighten that up or else the lines where you really need emphasis lose their importance.

Oh :))

I loved your story. It was short, with a point that you stated in your first line and proved. Since this site is overwhelmed with vampire/werewolf stories, this one was refreshing. I love your sense of humor. I can be like that sometimes but I can't keep it up indefinitely, as you seem to be able to. I'm envious.

I also appreciate all of the literary references (though I have not read the Inferno yet. I'm working on it.) And from reading their works I agree that Homer would have to be more pretentious than Virgil.

Thank you for the entertainment you have provided and restoring my faith in the writers on this site.

This is probably one of the best stories I've read in a whole.

I mean... the last two chapters were somewhat iffie. They confused me. But at the end all I said was 'holy shiznit.'

:) Loved the story.

-Renee

Very entertaining and well written!

It is depressing when you find an amazing story and it turns out that the story was finished ages ago, isn't it? Very depressing.

The story was amazing. Witty and entertaining. I loved it!

Short and Sweet. Good Job!

I liked the beggining but kind of got weird at the end. It ended to fast! But great job keep writing

Loved it(:

Really really really enjoyed this story. You had me laughing all the way through. Strangely enough, I really enjoyed the fact that it was so short. You were merely describing this girl's life, and an important event in it. Sure, there was little detail and little sense of emotion throughout, but it turns out like it fit. Well.

I really enjoyed this.

I wonder whats wrong with them, though i like hearing about their relationship i want to know more about the demon part.

Hm, this is just starting to get interesting- i say that when the sexy man comes in lol. No i like it so far though, the chicken and the egg debate at the begginning was an interesting and funny way to start the story.

This was charming. I kind of wish it went a bit deeper with emotions and everything, but over all it was charming. Nice job and happy writing!

That's a very cute... if kind of dark... story O.O

Aleron sounds very nice. I like his name a lot anyway.

I enjoyed the read