that was totally awesome!please update soon! horray to chocolate!

Not happy with the way the story is progressing? My only issue is that there aren't enough chapters. This story is funny!

"That’s not to say you won’t like the dying. They’re talented bastards."

Holy moly. That is genius. Sheer genius. I'm still laughing about it.

This is a kick-butt start.

This story makes me laugh, especially the chipmunk cheeks with the chocolates as Aleron walked in the cubicle. I can't wait for another chapter! :D

I'd love a story about Fred - if only because of the amazing name!

This is...amazing. I've been laughing hysterically the whole time. What a great distraction. :)

I liked this chapter. I want to see more demonicness or whatever for Aleron. That'd be cool to see a story about Fred or Jen. Fred just because she had a cool name, and Jen because you can show her breaking out of her shy shell. Update soon!

This is damn hilarious awsomeness! UDPATE!

I already wrote this before...blah blah blah...you're my hero and I love you for writing such a hotty demon...lots of praise and eternal fealty inserted here...I especially like Reggie because she especially likes chocolate...here's me throwing things that smell nice at you...and yeah. That's all I got. Good?

BRILLIANT!

Ollie

i like D

i like the pace of the story and that its a light read

im almost rooting for them, but where are his demon tendencies?

besides the cat thing?

O I love it! Hilarious and mysterious and realistic all at once. Update soon! :)

definitely loving the pace of this story, keep up the great work.

I love your characters. They are too cute for words. :) Update soon!

That's crazy talk! (Ok, I had to say it...) I think it should be rather easy to get five reviews. Post soon

Toy salamander-that's the best. I'm confused. Is he a real demon? He seems pretty human...and nice. OH well. Update soon!