|Reviews for The Apocalypse|
| InnocentSarcasm chapter 9 . 5/3/2012
I had to comment for this chapter the cuteness just went off the charts with Kevin and Christmas together
KevinChristmas Home Alone!
Well at least for me, easily my favorite chapter! now off I am to read more!
| castiel89 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
It's Amy from A Drop of Romeo! I'm here to proudly inform you that The Apocalypse has been added to the site under the Hate/Love category! Here's your congratulatory review:
The Apocalypse's summary is what first intrigued me. It let me know that the generic hate/love cliché had a bit of a twist to it. Hannah Ayers and Jake Allen have known each other since they were newborns. And have loathed each other for about as long. Now seniors in high school, it seems as if their never ending feud will be just that: never ending. That is, until, one stormy night when Hannah is in a terrible car accident leaving her with no memory whatsoever. Jake can either use this to his advantage in the ongoing war between them, or use it as an opportunity to truly befriend her and end it. He's truly torn. Because they've never got along before, Jake is very reluctant to be all buddy buddy with her. Although he tries to keep his distance from her, he looks out for her while she recovers as a favor to Hannah's family and to his mother. Amnesiac Hannah is a complete one-eighty compared to pre-accident Hannah regarding Jake. Overtime, it seems that Jake doesn't mind her company and actually befriends her, although he denies it. While at times, I felt like there was more dialogue than explanation, it wasn't overpowering. I still experienced all the feelings the author was portraying. I do wish the ending was a little more fluid. To me, it seemed a little thrown together. Despite minor typos, The Apocalypse was definitely a feel good read that left me with a fuzzy feeling in my stomach and a smile on my face.
Keep up the wonderful work!
| twibbit chapter 21 . 4/21/2012
Aww tat was a short ending :( I like the story though :)
| Rue chapter 21 . 4/12/2012
I love it... You don't know for how long i have been searching for a story like this one... Hope to read the sequel soon!
| FreakByTrade chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
It's such a cool plot line! And it's also SOOO freaky because I live where you're writing about and as soon as you started listing hospitals I just about flipped out! My first thought was: "HOLY CRAP I KNOW EXACTLY WHERE THEY ARE AND HAVE BEEN IN THEM!" So, that's my freaky moment of the day! Thanks for making it!
| wallflower bride chapter 21 . 1/12/2012
One word: WOW! Slept at 2 AM just to finish this story and it was definitely worth it. If this was a book, I'm totally buying this and will be rereading it when I'm in the mood. sigh, I'll miss this. Although, questions about Jake and Mercedes' relationship is still bothering me until now.
Weeeell, thank you for writing this - simply amazing and entertaining. Your characters are very likable - most of them anyway _
| Ceri Anne chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
This was one of the best stories I have read in quite a while. It was just what I was looking for. Cute and fluffy with a hopelessly romantic ending. Can't wait to read more of your work!
| Meg chapter 21 . 9/24/2011
I loved it! It was great :-) I couldn't stop reading! Thank you for a wonderful story :-D
| lovefromjuly chapter 21 . 9/8/2011
Unpredictable ending to an unpredictable story! So much different to the usual ones I read. Absolutely fantastic :)
| lovefromjuly chapter 16 . 9/8/2011
This had me all in a frenzy! Everything towards the end was just too cute.. I can't even explain! Haha. It gave me butterflies and giggles.
| lovefromjuly chapter 6 . 9/7/2011
Hi! So... Please don't hate me for saying this, but I didn't really admire Hannah after she got into the accident. Mainly because of how she thought of her friends. I mean, yes, they may seem annoying, but she was friends with them for a reason, you know? I kind of got annoyed at her for that (hope I wasn't being offensive, I'm trying to say it in the most constructive way possible). Anyhow, this chapter totally made up for it and it's really cute how Hannah's so oblivious to the fact that she and Jake weren't friends. My favorite scene was definitely at the end :)
| peanuts and paydays chapter 21 . 7/24/2011
So this was insanely wonderful. Great plot idea, great characters (I especially loved Isaac!), and great writing overall! The whole amnesia thing really stuck out to me too; I've never read a story about a girl losing her memory and a boy helping her out.. even if he was trying to get her off his back at first.
Jake and Hannah are much too adorable. I have to admit the whole "I hate you" cliche's my favorite, heheh. So it was definitely a pleasure reading the way you wrote it- especially since you wrote it in a good way. There are far too many fics where I can't stand the characters and the usage of that cliche.
There were times when I felt weird by Hannah's behavior, but it was all probably due to the fact that she felt confused and weird as well, and plus, she had amnesia.
I kind of wish there was an epilogue of some sort, but the ending IS perfect the way it is.
Anyway, this is definitely going into my favorites and I'll be sure to check out some of your other work :)
-peanuts and paydays
| chantellovesya chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
This chapter made me tear up a little. :'(
| Ivix chapter 21 . 6/13/2011
I reaaally loved the story.
It's just great ) I'm sad its over
| Kaleidoscope World chapter 16 . 5/7/2011
I love this chapter :"
great story! :D