Reviews for Opacity
openmouthblues chapter 1 . 7/1/2007

We write poetry the same way, with the use of bold, italics, and underlines.

I've never seen anyone else write like that before, besides me, and it was kind of a shock in the face.

Well done.

But, besides that, I did like the poem. It was well put together, and it relates to normal people. It wasn't some fantastical collage of extravagant events.

Hi-ho, hi-ho...


Well done. Brava.

-Icicle Tears