Reviews for A Final Sunrise
Fida chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Wow, Quincely! I don't read much fiction on this sight (mostly stick to the poetry), but this was really good! Tragic. Beautiful. Great descriptions. Your other piece is good too, but I really like this one.

Thanks for letting me read!

~Jen p.s. and now you have my penname...
Adalicia chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
Wow! That was SO sad...but so very well written! I really enjoyed it, and the idea was great! Very unique! Loved it! :)

~~J.L.
tearing hands chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
I loved it! It was heartbreaking and sad and really well-written. I could see every scene you described. And even though it was a short story, I liked the plot- the servant befriending the master's prisoner.
BeckysxTourturedxSoul chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Dude, that was so awesome. It's so sad and morbid, but it really just smacks you in the face. It very well described and you can see in your head everything that's going on. You can even feels the girls pain as she dies.
FrEnChMaN chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Hey,

This one good short story... One of the better ones I've read in a long time... I like the way you describe the way each part of the story is like, cause' I can really see it in my head...

Cheers!

FrEnChMaN