Reviews for ladyfingers
servatis-a-pereculum chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Awesome inspiration! You are extremely talented!
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
interesting imagery. love love the last lines. nice work.
Basara chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
hahaha! sorry for the laugh... but this one's creative ( in my own opinion of myself at oddity's sake ) sweet!

disabled account chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
M ... tiramisu inspires me too. I love the expression "ladyfinger lust."
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I love the power in the lines 'his fingers stick in her hair like cinders'.

The first 5 lines seemed very real, down to earth and dirty.

The last two seemed kind of magic.