Reviews for Three Wishes, A Yaoi Oneshot |
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![]() ![]() what review? its...wierd? 2 in inside? is that even possible? Could you draw an illustration? |
![]() ![]() AWESOME CAKES! |
![]() ![]() You got me horny and my boyfriends out of town... Damn my luck... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice oneshot, good threesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() . Loved it. |
![]() ![]() xD I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol nice ending rambles. And I actually really liked it. It was some hot hot hot yaoi! Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahem. Can I just say, HOT DAMN. I'm always about a yaoi threesome, but most of the time they aren't done as well as they could be. This, however, has raised my expectations for stories like this. Rest assured I will definitely be rereading this. |
![]() ![]() ...Wow. First off, I'm going to say that it takes a lot to make me blush. A LOT. I blushed. Hard. The image of that was just... /... Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD I love ur oneshot so so much, it's one of the best I've read. Keep up the good work :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Finally, this is the first fic i have found so far with a three way and i love it. :D It was awesome so keep it up. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it... It makes me wish I was stranded on a desert island ;) I want more, I wish it was more than a oneshot. Really well done XD Bai bai |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story. the plot and characters all go together nicely. the plot may seem nonexistant to you, but it is there. word choice and overall grammar was good. hope you do well in the future with more oneshots. good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness. I LOVED IT! This was my first threesome! XD |