Reviews for Piano Lesson
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I think this is very beautifully written. Both thoughtful and creative. Nicely done! Keep up the great work. ] -Sara
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I like the way you've broken this up - the paragraphing between sentences, but I don't know whether I like the lines... It does work, but it breaks it up too much.

I love the first two lines here - really sets the tone for the poem.