Reviews for Element: The beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like it. really nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, can't wait to hear more. The only thing is when you said "Nine years later the children have grown up and are still toddlers..." it didn't make much since that they had grown up but were still toddlers. Keep writing, I'm adding this to favorite stories and i can't wait to hear more. |