Reviews for Payback
BillyJoeBob chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
So I thought I would read all of your work first, and then add some reviews- but for this one I just couldn't resist! Echos from your childhood I think. I remember... By the way, your stuff is excellent!
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
konnichi wa

LoL! I think that's the cutest poem I've ever read. It was a wonderful story as well, and it was just so - so - adorable! The little girls, their plans, how the little boys inadvertantly spoiled them. *grin* That was so cute.

Zaijen

-Shan-
daffodil flower chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
YOU DID A GOOD JOB EXPLANING THE WHOLE STORY.

I LIKED IT.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Aw, that's kinda cute. I liked it. Again, a neat new perspective.