Reviews for Altitude
DreamlessInfinity chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
I’m running out of words to describe how perfect your poems sound. You truly are an amazing writer.

Dreamless
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I loved the last line. Did you stick it way out there on purpose though? I didn't notice it at first...
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
this feels a little less personal than your other poems, and at the same time more concrete and image-filled. none of that's a bad thing, by the way- this is the way my taste in poetry runs so of course i like it :P

i'm not sure if you made the last line left-anchored on purpose, because the rest of the poem is centered, but i thought i'd mention it.