|Reviews for with exhausted whispers|
| somelilgirl chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Oh wow, LOVE is the only thing i can say! God this reminds me of my last relationship. beautiful though.
| x.Miss.Twiztid.x chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Honestly, I don't know what else to say. Your imagery and raw emotion left me breathless. I love it.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
like i never reviewed this. christ. [those are some of my favorite words, you know. 'you will come back even if i have to tattoo your name across my palms'. it screams cassihaunting all over them, chica.] seriously. it's all the best things about your writing rolled into lightandshadow and origami. i'm completely in love with it.
come back soon, doll, and bring your words with you.
| fluorescent youth chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
this is brilliant. very raw and powerful. i especially love the line where you say "i want you to take over my immune system and destroy my cells/rebuild me in any way you see beautiful", it speaks of the perfection girls feel they must maintain to get the guy, and the last stanza is incredibly relatable.
| S. JayFinch chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Yeah this is simply fantastic.
| axis.on.a.tilt chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
the last two lines of the first verse, the second of the second verse, and all of the last.
I am in love with the sun hitting windows the right way.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
wow, great poem. It's just friggin awesome lol, that's all I can say. Keep it up, you're a great poet.
| Esmeralda chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I love every word.