Reviews for The Want of Need
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
This piece feels so much different than your usual pieces. I don't mind that at all, though. "You lift the weeds high, don't you, darling?" That line shows so much humanity, imperfection. I love it. This is really a piece about love and how it makes someone normally so eloquent turn into a bumbling fool. Not saying that this isn't eloquent or that you're a bumbling fool, but you know what I mean. I love the human element to this. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
tearing hands chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
"Speaking like a rainforest/ that breathes one last sigh/ before the chainsaws snarl/ to scar our fingertips." I love that part. The singular lines after each stanza worked really well. Definitely unique.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
You lift the weeds high don't you, darling?


very emotional, that is an understatement. it is traveling from less vague to vase-shattering madness.

or anger.