|Reviews for Unfiltered|
| the truth beneath the rose chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
I don't why, but that made me smile. :] Instead of the person being all heartbroken and waiting, they take the situation into their own hands and decide to move on. Atleast, that's how I interpreted it. Overall, good job. I like your style, it's just so refreshing & different from the norm.
| Basara chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
hm... well, a fresh scar is really damaging one's understanding...
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I like how you bolded Stop. It adds to the haiku I think, which, by the way, is great.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
The flow works really well for this piece and I love the words you've chosen. The "Stop" at the end of line two really makes the poem jump out from the paper; especially since its written in bold. Nicely done! Thanks for the reviews!
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Good flow and words. Very well done.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Excellent sound and flow. Well done.