Chilling, very chiiling. I like it!

i LOVE this! that boy is my type _- no really, he is. that's kinda how i act at church, so we stoped going there. i love horror, and never get scared by it, i just laugh at it...my friends and family think i'm an evil killer demon...but it was a good story! i will obey the copyright laws and hope that one day this will be turned into a longer movie

Ha, Damian; it's a name variant of "daemon" isn't it? Anyway, it was pretty good story overall. I rather liked the idea of his name given to him at BIRTH was the cause of his behavior while his mother was worrying the whole way through that she was RAISING him wrong.

um... so as read in your author's note you got this idea just siting in church. But yet i've seen a movie almost like this. All there was was a few changes. Humm... i sort of dont believe that you made this up because this sounds too much like the OMEN.I mean you could hav pulled it off by making it... well making it way . Maybe you should make up something that isnt based on a movie.

This was a bit creepy. I liked it though...even though it really creeped me out. Im twisted that way. haha. This is a great piece, but I hate how you ended it. Could you return the R&R and review my story called: That boy on a bike. I really need input on it...and I need the reviews and hits. It be great if you could and I'd really appreciate it. Thanks.

Until Always,

A-xx