Reviews for Carnal Cove |
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![]() ![]() Whew, that was hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhaha! I LOVED THIS! The characters seemed real and it wasn't cliched like the 'story-line' would suggest (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty good read. I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you die again you slag? And you didn't even enter the ficathon.I am so ashamed of you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is by far the sickest and the weirdest (and the funniest XD) thing I've ever read! You shoulda made it longer! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i fucking love this story. period. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this was so cute! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Generally well-written, though I think it would be better if this was rated M. xD Pretty good, and an awesome addition from clumsy eloQuence 6 to our c2. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, this was hilarious and I like their interactions with each other. I paused at that obstreperous word too I was like 'huh... it is,' ditto with prurient lol, but hey I was amused, got a hot kiss scene and learned something all in one go. And on fictionpress at that. But yeah, the community sounds extremely interesting, is it going to be part of a series of one-shots? Like a bunch of seperate one-shots set up in Carnal Cover? Just asking because you put a bit of information in setting the background of the town up for us and I think the story would've worked even without that backstory. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bahahha i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright alright, here's your review! I like the way you've written your story. Alot of humour, very fun. Oh, and the whole "‘aw-look-they’re-arguing-again-how-cute’ thing." :P The ditzy sister is UNBELIEVABLE. But it adds to the humour, so woo. Awesome story. Oh btw, I've recommended your story to a whole lot of people, and everyone who's read it so far have said- uh, not too much. Their mouths were hanging open :P (They're just really bad reviewers, heh.) Spread forth thy skills and put the bar a little higher, Young 'Un. Peace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This, my dear, was the most fucked up cute thing I have read yet. At first, I thought it was going to be a new story seeing as you're about ready to fire a bazooka at Nikita, but it was just a one-shot. I like Callie way better than Nikita. She has spunk. The idea of Carnal Cove is pretty interesting. You should expand on it. But you'd lose gas pretty fast. Anyway, I just got back from hell. AKA Vacation W/ My Grandmother. It was like ten fucking o'clock, and she turned off the damn telly because she couldn't get to sleep. So, I turn it back on, and she starts cursing at me, so I just ignore her, and continue to watch telly for two more hours because there was no fucking computer within a 100 mile radius. Oh, guess what. You didn't write that review you said you were going to. I don't hate you though. Cause this was incredibly entertaining once I actually got into it. Other than that, my brain is mush, and i'll probably be leaving in a couple days again for nationals hell. Oh, and I visit my optomistrist from hell tomorrow. Damn bitch can't keep her mouth shut. So, I think I'll go now. I have the sudden urge to write something, we'll see how screwed up I can make it be. |