Reviews for Carnal Cove
PC chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Whew, that was hot.
x Farii chapter 1 . 9/2/2010


The characters seemed real and it wasn't cliched like the 'story-line' would suggest (:
mizgardenia21 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This was a pretty good read. I enjoyed it.
K.B. Hanna chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Did you die again you slag? And you didn't even enter the ficathon.I am so ashamed of you.
rawrr.sock.puppett chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
This is by far the sickest and the weirdest (and the funniest XD) thing I've ever read! You shoulda made it longer! :D
Hyperroll chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
wow, i fucking love this story. period.
x3life chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
aww this was so cute! )
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Generally well-written, though I think it would be better if this was rated M. xD Pretty good, and an awesome addition from clumsy eloQuence 6 to our c2. (:
jammi chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I loved it, this was hilarious and I like their interactions with each other. I paused at that obstreperous word too I was like 'huh... it is,' ditto with prurient lol, but hey I was amused, got a hot kiss scene and learned something all in one go. And on fictionpress at that.

But yeah, the community sounds extremely interesting, is it going to be part of a series of one-shots? Like a bunch of seperate one-shots set up in Carnal Cover? Just asking because you put a bit of information in setting the background of the town up for us and I think the story would've worked even without that backstory.
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
bahahha i love it!
escaped-asylum-inmate chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Alright alright, here's your review!

I like the way you've written your story. Alot of humour, very fun. Oh, and the whole "‘aw-look-they’re-arguing-again-how-cute’ thing." :P

The ditzy sister is UNBELIEVABLE. But it adds to the humour, so woo.

Awesome story.

Oh btw, I've recommended your story to a whole lot of people, and everyone who's read it so far have said- uh, not too much. Their mouths were hanging open :P

(They're just really bad reviewers, heh.)

Spread forth thy skills and put the bar a little higher, Young 'Un.

When Nudity Ruled The World chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
This, my dear, was the most fucked up cute thing I have read yet. At first, I thought it was going to be a new story seeing as you're about ready to fire a bazooka at Nikita, but it was just a one-shot.

I like Callie way better than Nikita. She has spunk. The idea of Carnal Cove is pretty interesting. You should expand on it. But you'd lose gas pretty fast.

Anyway, I just got back from hell. AKA Vacation W/ My Grandmother. It was like ten fucking o'clock, and she turned off the damn telly because she couldn't get to sleep. So, I turn it back on, and she starts cursing at me, so I just ignore her, and continue to watch telly for two more hours because there was no fucking computer within a 100 mile radius.

Oh, guess what. You didn't write that review you said you were going to. I don't hate you though. Cause this was incredibly entertaining once I actually got into it.

Other than that, my brain is mush, and i'll probably be leaving in a couple days again for nationals hell. Oh, and I visit my optomistrist from hell tomorrow. Damn bitch can't keep her mouth shut.

So, I think I'll go now. I have the sudden urge to write something, we'll see how screwed up I can make it be.