|Reviews for Youth|
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I liked how this was in past tense. It gave off the feeling that freedom once was and can never be again. Great haiku.
| Basara chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I like how you equate this descriptive freedom with youth. Quite hard to recapture the feeling. Good haiku.
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Somehow it reminds me of a myths. Good job in this haiku.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Beautiful last line. Nice haiku.