Reviews for Youth
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I liked how this was in past tense. It gave off the feeling that freedom once was and can never be again. Great haiku.
Basara chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
mecury... hm...

nice...
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I like how you equate this descriptive freedom with youth. Quite hard to recapture the feeling. Good haiku.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Somehow it reminds me of a myths. Good job in this haiku.

-C.N
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Beautiful last line. Nice haiku.