Reviews for Forever Yours
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Innovative and very real. A great thought. This might not be your favorite, but it's good. Good job!

-C.N
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
You may not like it, but I did. The meaning and truth behind the words. Good job, really.
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
I really liked this, it feels...real. I especially liked the second line. That was a great thought. Also, the idea of the cheap cards in general was quite innovative.

But lines 9 & 10, I thought they felt a bit awkward. I guess it has special meaning for you, though.
socks-lost chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
sad, but that math thing was me lol i like the idea of the cheap card thing and forever is never well neway good job
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Non-conformity, 'friendship', rejection... So much is conveyed in not that long a poem. Great job.