Reviews for Meaningless
socks-lost chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This was good. The reader can really feel your pain or a little of it at least. Very good, my favorite line was

"I think it might help this pounding that’s resounding throughout my whole being." cuz of the rhyming thing keep it up
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Hey! Don't think like that, . .paper! No meaning? Sure there is! Get out there and do something-I'm fourteen like you and I think my life has a meaning...I do community service, write and inspire people.

But enough instructing. You're poem is really, really good and full of raw emotion. It's very frightening and moving.

-Shadow