Reviews for In the Shadow
Isca chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Chilling!

The imagery and 'haunting' feeling is really intense.

Good work!

:)
Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
O. It gives me this cold, mysterious chill. I like it!
STORMPAW chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
That is true. But fear is found not in God.
Kairi Uzeniba chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
T_T
Basara chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
true...

nice...
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This made me want to check my house before I sleep. Mysterious with a touch of drama in it. Excellent haiku.

-C.N
Chameleon81 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I really liked this one. It creates a vivid picture... dark and scary. One of my favorites.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This piece has an awesome haunting feel to it and the author's note at the bottom really added depth and I thought it was a really nice touch. This makes me want to take a flashlight and check behind the doors in my house and pierce the shadows but at the same time I want to just sit here frozen because you've given me that feeling that I know that something is going to come and get me. I love the words you've used to portray the image. I especially like "tripping the unsuspecting." Excellent haiku! I'm adding this to my favorites.
Definition chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Very mysterious and has a touch of drama and suspense. I love the feeling that this haiku gives off - it's powerful, yes, but it's not overwhelming, as there is a subtle tone to it. I'm not quite sure how to put it...Amazing haiku, though.
lklittle chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Wonderful haiku.

Should we hide from this shadow or continue with numb movements?