Reviews for The Coffee Shop
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Now this is extremely cute! Yes, you knew what was coming but I don't care! It was adorable, perfectly executed and a quick easy read on a day - that ironically is a gray, misty day!
Thulia chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This was a lovely story. I think it was just the right pace, and just the right amount of teasing out the clues.
You made it feel whimsical, and I could picture all the momments, perfectly, in my head.
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
foreigndelight chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
oh yeah.

ıt was a little bit predictable, but still, it was a nice job.

It started long, ended short. It gave the complicated feelings then it slapped the truth.

hım hım.

Liked the way of your writing.

makes me tremble.

Also,(must add:)) an interesting view of coffee
Rabbit chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Hi. I like this story, but I've read it before (it was almost exactly the same.)

I read a similar one (diff names though) on and just thought I should let you know. You may have had your story stolen, you may have stolen the story (sorry. Don't wish to put any blame on you but it has a slim possibility) or you may have published it on two websites. Either way... Just letting you know
breatheyou7 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
ahh this was lovely.

beautifully written, quite simple writing but great.

fantastic idea.
Flitter chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
awe... that has got to be one of the most charming things I have EVER read. thanks for makeing my day better!
reindrops chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Homigosh, the story is short but I love it. It's wonderfully written and I love the ending. :3
Ulsindhe chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
This oneshot is seriously seriously good. The feeling you get as a reader going through the protagonist's blurry mind, trying to pick up pieces and putting them together-it's exhilarating and exciting, especially when the clues start to make sense.

It's a kind of story that presents a closure that is "just right". It's neither too long, nor too short. The attachment you get to the characters is just right, leaving you with a satisfied yearning in the end without all the hassles of heart-wrenching sob stories.

This is good. Really good. Well done!
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
hahe so adorable
Marjorie chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Uhm. Funny. Cause I read a story exactly like this before.. /
elma chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
That was a nice story. :)

I really love how it was done. I honestly didn't expect at all for that woman to previously know him until maybe halfway when she talks about him being "neither here nor there". And yeah, the ending wasn't too climatic... I think the story's strongest point was the beginning! And I really really liked how it was done :) good job!
KForKrissie chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I know thins one-shot has been out for a while, but I just had to review anyways. This is by far one of the best one-shots I have ever read! Not necessarily becuase of the writing was fabulous, not that it wasn't, but becuase the story behind the writing is fabulous. Absolutely great! The plot was what I really loved so much about this. :)
Ribena chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Aaw :) Im going to have admit, I am soo retarded that I had to read the reviews then re-read the text to realise that they are each others fiance and that he has amnesia (Im guessing thats the name of his memory loss) It kind of reminded me of the Notebook BUT this is still very original as in the approach Claire takes with her fiance.. aaw.. ive been in a glum mood and this certainly made me feel better :) Your an excellent writer.
Chissna chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Wow, I really love this one-shot. The ending is very cliche, but cute at the same time.
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