Reviews for The Coffee Shop
Dreamless-Wonder chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
aw. cute story!
akawebstergirl chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Marvelous. Simply lovely.
emrevolemina chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
wonderful . That's the only thing I could think of describing it. Wonderful.
CK Shorty chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Short, simple, and beautiful :O)
Kjersti chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Really nice. Great story. I loved it.
zoule chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
A very sweet story :)
dancrchick chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Aww super cute. The whole idea was definitely a great one and you wrote it well. Great job.
Trishcbury chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
wow, that was really good.

i love how you tied it together.
sweetone0018 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
aww that was so sweet I loved it.

It made me smile.
Citlali chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Wow... that was really awesome and sweet, but I thought it was more bittersweet than anything else. Are you really going to leave it like that? I can't help but feel like something horrible happens after this, or she has to see if he remembers every day or something. But this was really sweet anyways _ Great job
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I know you've probably heard this already, but this is so sweet.

It really reminds me of the Harry Chapin song "Shooting Star." It's an old song, but there's a man who is crazy, living on the streets, and this woman who picks him up. She protects him and loves him, and in return, she's the only thing that he recognizes that is in reality. This wasn't quite as bad as that song, but it just struck me as almost the same situation...

Anyway, I really liked it. It was just long enough to tell the story, with hardly a wasted word. Great job!

lostinmydreams chapter 1 . 7/6/2007

) that was short simple and sweet

made my day


its going down as a favorite
Cindy chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
that was so cute.
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
so sweet

hes a little crazy but the girl was so sweet


i love this - its going in my favourites!
lydia chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
that made my day. thank you

short and sweet ]

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