Reviews for Heartfelt Pain
Basara chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
...the crashing of sadness...

Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Your haiku is so true. Simple but strong in emotion. Well done.

xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I love the boldness of this piece. Its so simple, but it leaves a really strong impression. I love the last line. It fits so perfectly. Well done!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Being stabbed in the heart always seems to hurt, no matter how we tell ourselves it doesn't. Your haiku has much truth.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
nice poem, or is it a haiku? idk lol, it was creative and deep and it seems the knife was too. well anywayz good job and i hope to hear more from you and your poetry soon.