|Reviews for Shorts|
| you'll see chapter 2 . 7/6/2007
Both of these fragments are very good, in my opinion.
Perhaps, for this one, changing "place" to "page" in the first sentence to connect it more with "almost a drawing..." would have more of a effect. If you wanted to elaborate on this, how did the narrator meet this girl, or come in contact with a 2D world?