|Reviews for Young Teacher|
| SarahGemini chapter 31 . 1/8
I've been a fan of your writing for so long, so many years. You once even emailed me to notify of your return but then you dropped off the radar again. Out of just pure curiosity I checked your profile and saw you were back again, although I was slightly confused by the removed stories.
I find this new version interesting. I couldn't help but grin at the parts a recognised but I felt it missed so much. There are so many sweet parts I remember from your old versions: Bekah getting drunk and Dan Storming over and threatening a stomach pump; Dan coming round at night to kiss her through the screen on her window; the dance where they kissed in the closet? My memories may be hazy mind but it really added to the romance. Even the version where Bekah was with is brother (although never my favourite since I am completely team Dan) the romance and love was so clear. In this version it feels so much like you snipped up the more beautiful versions and shortened it to the point that the love doesn't really feel developed enough for them to be so in love.
I'm not saying this version is bad at all by the way, the new twist is interesting but the chapters so far feel empty and short compared to your extremely well wrote first book. I'm really looking forward to what you do with this.
I love your writing JennieMR, I can't wait to see you update again.
| Guest chapter 43 . 11/8/2013
I can't wait to see what Dan is going to do. I like the play on Phantom it makes me wonder if she's in the house where he's at? Hmm, wondering how far apart they really are?
| Abby Daniels chapter 43 . 11/7/2013
This update took forever...pls pls pls update the next chapter very soon plssss!
| XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 43 . 11/6/2013
Yay! So glad you're back! A wonderful, marvelous chapter! I can't wait to see what Bekah is going to do. I hope Dan decks his father a good one for all the BS he has been putting everyone thru.
| amberuae28 chapter 42 . 10/8/2013
Missing my favorite author! Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 42 . 9/16/2013
I can't help it I just love any scene with Dan in it. I feel so close to him it's like he's a character I created. I'm a romantic at heart so I'm looking forward to when Dan sees Rose again. :) Thanks for sharing!
| MerryMe2 chapter 42 . 9/16/2013
Dan thinks his dad did it? Why? I guess I can think of some things, this is interesting.
| XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 41 . 9/4/2013
They need to include a 'Like' "Love" button for each and every chapter, and I promise you I would be hitting 'love' Button on every chapter. :) That much said, I loved it! I especially love Bekah's "Ya'll can take your girly clothes and your pink walls and stick 'em where the sun doesn't shine." Funny thing is I live in the country so I know exactly what pitch and tone she used :P
| Guest chapter 41 . 9/2/2013
I can't wait to see Dan manhandle this crew. :) Thanks for sharing.
| XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 40 . 8/29/2013
Love the little park that Allie gave out! I hope she gets better soon! I love the new twist that you added to the story :)
| Guest chapter 40 . 8/27/2013
I was hoping Dan would rush in there and learn something from Brian. A fast read for a chapter. I think Rose likes it when these two fight over her she would have loved to know they were going at it. :)
| amberuae28 chapter 40 . 8/27/2013
I can't wait for the next update!
Your writing is as marvelous as ever *-*
You make me fall in love with this fic all over again every time you update.
I'm thinking about re-reading this for the fourth time hehehe
Keep up the amazing work! and update soon, please!
| Guest chapter 39 . 8/22/2013
I like this new twist, and it's going to wake Dan up to seeing that he really does love Rose. Nothing like
a good twist to make the story more interesting. :)
| Guest chapter 38 . 8/21/2013
Wow what a great twist, didn't see that one coming. I have no idea who's taken her, but Dan is going to be beside himself that's for sure.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Abby Daniels chapter 38 . 8/20/2013
My God nothing most happen to bekah...God knows dat girl has gone through alot...when is the next update coming?