|Reviews for Young Teacher|
| Guest chapter 37 . 8/17/2013
What a good ending I was afraid he wasn't going to admit he Loved her and she would stomp off. I wonder what he has up his sleeve, and if his conscious will allow him to go farther in this relationship.
| XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 37 . 8/17/2013
Oh em gee! soo good! I hope Dan finds a loophole!
| Raven Mistress chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Good luck finding my review in this sea of reviews! Ha! This is amazing so far. I'm loving this. :) Will keep reading at some point! Yaaay!
| Guest chapter 36 . 8/15/2013
Caught in the act, I knew that sooner or later this would happen, but I figured it would be Dan's brother that found them. I wonder what someone seeing them like this will do to Dan. If it will slow him down and cause him to pull back.
| under the influence chapter 36 . 8/14/2013
I never had any teachers like that...lucky girl
| amberuae28 chapter 36 . 8/14/2013
Awwwwwwww! Ohhh, this chapter was amazing! What a Cliffhanger! I can't get enough of Rebecca and Dan's chemistry, it's out of this world! I love these two characters so much! I love how Dan is so protective over Rebecca, and how he has brought her so much closer to God. I'm now seriously freaking out about what John will do next! I want Rebecca and Dan to become even closer! I love the passion, chemistry, and banter that goes back between the two of them, I absolutely LOVE your writing style! Anxiously awaiting next chapter.
| Guest chapter 35 . 8/9/2013
Nice chapter, as always thanks for sharing, working on a novel is a hard intense thing and it's not always easy to share our little babies with others.
I just Love Dan of course and Bekah is growing on me. :) I also agree with this verse.
"What I'm saying is, we tend to complicate what God has simplified. We think we need to live up to certain standards,
We do tend to complicate things as humans we go over board, it's really simple Christ died for us and he wants us to come to him with a broken spirit, Bekah was finally there and broken. Nice chapter, and I love little zingers as I call them and the last line here was a good one.
How could she not love the man who'd lead her to eternal Truth? How could she not love Dan Shields, period?
| XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 34 . 8/7/2013
I loved chapter 2-10! Way better then the originally rough draft. I love how you had Bekah discover the God on her own without really having to talk to Dan this time and I love how you had her find the passage about the well. Awesome job! Keep up the great work!
| jamesgirl06 chapter 34 . 8/6/2013
I like bekah and Dan together!
| LeaveThePieces chapter 34 . 8/6/2013
Alright. Can't ignore that call for feedback.
1) Glad no one is possessed. That would freak me out...
2) I'm not quite sure where I stand with the supernatural, though I can tell you quite a few stories of my own that leave me wondering... Though it is getting a little heavy in this story so I can honestly tell you I'm glad it will lighten up.
3) I feel bad for Ryan... But then again I'm a complete hopeless romantic so I know they can't end up together.
4) No matter how much I want it to happen... I know her and Dan can't be together quite yet... Though the possibility of something with John has me a bit freaked out...
5) Glad to see her character develop. Though I'm a bit iffy about this past chapter. I know it has been building, but it still seems kind of sudden that she's leaping into the lords arms. I'm not saying it's unbelievable, but I'd expect she's still a bit weary of everything she's reading.
I will admit, I am greatly struggling with the possibility that in this version it just doesn't work out for Rebekah and Dan and it's making me slightly scared to finish reading...
| Amber chapter 34 . 8/6/2013
So much emotion and everything is described perfectly. The story is amazing, it's brilliant. I love it so much! And just for the record, I will never stop reading this story. I love every single one of your ideas, and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Amber chapter 34 . 8/6/2013
So much emotion and everything is described perfectly. This story is amazing, it's brilliant. I love it so much! And just for the record, I will never stop reading this story! I love every single one of your ideas and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| Samantha chapter 33 . 8/6/2013
I love the tension in this one, and I always love Dan where ever he is. I like the tension between the brothers, and I like that Ryan is having issues with her coming to Christ, he is afraid that he will lose even more of her. I'm not sure he really cares for her or if he's just using her. I just have not figured him out yet.
Thanks for sharing
| Abby Daniels chapter 32 . 8/4/2013
Wow dis keeps getting better...it's dan she wants ryan should just let them be...waiting for more updates!
| EdwinPixie chapter 31 . 7/31/2013
Loving these chapters so much! I liked Dan's conversation with Brian, it was interesting to hear of Brian's viewpoints on Rebekah - typical boy haha I also enjoyed Dan's intimidating side. John's revelation was startling, I wonder if that's the truth or if there's more to the story? Can't wait for more!