Reviews for Her Thoughts
tines396x chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I really enjoyed this. Write more please :)
Coping Mechanism chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I like this alot. but what's this about someone writing the last word of every line for you? was it like a writing exercise in school or something of that nature? anyways I liked it, but the word "countenance" has too many syllables and kind of breaks the flow a bit, I'd find a synonym with a few less syllables if I were you. As for adding more imagery, I'd be careful, you've got great imagery already, you don't want to force more stuff in the at the expense of a relatively good piece of work as it stands now.
TiReD oF tHiS bOrInG tOwN chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
its good. i like it