Reviews for The Elvin Sword: To Get the Black Sword
Kent Edwins chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
Good. Now that the history lesson is over, I take it the real story is about to begin. Looking forward to it.

I just noticed something... shouldn't it be "Elven" not "Elvin"
Kent Edwins chapter 2 . 7/7/2007
Watch some grammar, like "or rather through he arm, it seemed". Otherwise, not too bad. There's a lot of stories about Elves and dark lords about, I hope you can avoid the normal cliches. Or just do a kickass job of telling them.
haha-no chapter 2 . 7/7/2007
well, you very well might explain this later, but how did she get the mark? being descriptave is never a bad thing, and don't be worried about over description. if it is too descriptave and you don't like it, you can always change it.
haha-no chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
interesting plot... but very short chapter! write a little more to catch interest.- i like the idea you get across though