|Reviews for Down, Down|
| xfail chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I could truly feel everything you described. This is very deep, somehow. I love the way it sounds, the way it feels, everything. Awesome job.
| Broken Spiral chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
An interesting out-of-body and in-body experience. You transported me right into that grey morning you described. Nice job!