Reviews for The Black Rose
luneress chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
wow! this sounds really good. sorry to hear u took it down. can't wait to read it!
steel cut oats chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
I hope your fixing. Because this sucked.

Really bad. Also, noticed how the evil lady's daughter watches? Tell us, we really need to be told rather than visualize an elf (cliche upon cliche!) getting slain.

Protip: Show, not tell! It makes cliches look less like crap. Distraction, mostly.
nolongeraround chapter 27 . 8/13/2007
Ooh! I like the way this story is going so far! I would write a longer review but I have other things to do.
nolongeraround chapter 26 . 8/13/2007
Okay, so I found out who he was in this chapter! Alright! Tinker has a harsh tongue, a little more than before.
nolongeraround chapter 25 . 8/13/2007
Heh, he has an antenna? That's funny. White? I guess I'll see in the next couple of chapters.
nolongeraround chapter 24 . 7/15/2007
That would hurt, to suddenly grow like that. Now that Tinker is big, it should be interesting. Good chapter.
nolongeraround chapter 23 . 7/15/2007
Oh dear, they took Tinker and Bella! That's not good.
nolongeraround chapter 22 . 7/13/2007
Oh! This sounds like it's going to be interesting.
nolongeraround chapter 21 . 7/13/2007
Well, that sucks. Great chapter! Off to read more.
nolongeraround chapter 20 . 7/13/2007
Heh, he was talking to a pixie...oops. Good chapter.
nolongeraround chapter 19 . 7/12/2007
I don't know why but I laughed at this: “But then what does it mean for me to rise from my ashes? Do I die?”
nolongeraround chapter 18 . 7/12/2007
I hate it when people finish each other's sentences. It creeps me out. Good chapter.
nolongeraround chapter 17 . 7/11/2007
Oh, wow. What happened? I am curious. Good chapter.
nolongeraround chapter 16 . 7/11/2007
Great chapter. I like how intense the Goddess is with her training.
Ember Swish chapter 15 . 7/10/2007
Great chpter! goodness, Alhmah is gumpy! Haha, can't wait till the next chapter. Still a few spacing problems, but not half as much as before.
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