Reviews for The Black Rose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this sounds really good. sorry to hear u took it down. can't wait to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope your fixing. Because this sucked. Really bad. Also, noticed how the evil lady's daughter watches? Tell us, we really need to be told rather than visualize an elf (cliche upon cliche!) getting slain. Protip: Show, not tell! It makes cliches look less like crap. Distraction, mostly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! I like the way this story is going so far! I would write a longer review but I have other things to do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so I found out who he was in this chapter! Alright! Tinker has a harsh tongue, a little more than before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, he has an antenna? That's funny. White? I guess I'll see in the next couple of chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That would hurt, to suddenly grow like that. Now that Tinker is big, it should be interesting. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear, they took Tinker and Bella! That's not good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This sounds like it's going to be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that sucks. Great chapter! Off to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, he was talking to a pixie...oops. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why but I laughed at this: “But then what does it mean for me to rise from my ashes? Do I die?” |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate it when people finish each other's sentences. It creeps me out. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. What happened? I am curious. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I like how intense the Goddess is with her training. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chpter! goodness, Alhmah is gumpy! Haha, can't wait till the next chapter. Still a few spacing problems, but not half as much as before. |