Reviews for Bathtub Longing
Basara chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
thoughts which lay swimming aisle on one's mind which relaxing... disturbing, yes...

Kairi Uzeniba chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Good! I liked it. And just out of do you do the Japanese letters?

kAiRi Of UzEnIbA cLaN
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
This made me smile and think at the same time. The stanzas are in haiku form. I like this because it can be taken literally or figuratively. In literal sense, it takes me somewhere along the lines of bath time . Figuratively, I'm still pondering about it. I notice your rhymes once again and it still has the natural feel to it. It flows well and makes me want to read it again. Beautiful job and I'm adding this to my faves.


P.S Pardon the long review.