|Reviews for Carousel|
| a beautiful somewhere chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
This is... really freaking good. The slight repetition near the end is just right; it reiterates the point without being too redundant.
Just... really really good.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Sent shivers down my spine. The ending is so powerful. And unexpected; from the way the beginning goes, you'd never expect that from the end.
But I love it nonetheless.
| 0Dark Roses0 chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Very interesting and creative, I see you have a lot of talent. I DO suggest using capitlization(sp?) and punctuation it makes the read much more enjoyable. Loved it nonetheless!
| TiReD oF tHiS bOrInG tOwN chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
poor horses. i have never liked carisouls