|Reviews for Will and Lyra poem|
| The Divine Redeemer chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Hey :) I've read all of the "His Dark Materials" books too and the Amber Spyglass made me cry, and to be honest, your poem made me cry too :') Keep writing, you're doing brilliant! :)
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
A lovely poem, captured the emotions beautifully.
One bit of advice; perhaps don't make reference to the poem in the poem itself.
Other than that, this was wonderful. I think you've got the characters just right, too.