Reviews for Not supposed to
Hayonushi Takintoshiba chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
I'm so mad with the dickhead that drove you to do this but hey, you can always write a book that you can copwrite and stuff. That way we can get your amazing writing :) I'm really sad to see this story go, and just UGGGHHHH ANGER.
naraka chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I think you should report to fiction press and other sites where you posted that your story has been stolen through the: report member user/spam (it appears if you press help below the Sign In and Sign Up links) it will alert administrators to the problem. I also think you shouldn't post more chapters, it makes me sad to say this since I love this story so much, but if those mean people are going to act like that, you should do the best you can to protect your stories, and if that means not sharing the ending with the readers, I support it. Of course there are websites like livejournal and etc, that will only allow people to read your stories by password or by adding you as a friend if you so wish. This way you can control those blackmailing bullies. I also think you should copyright your stories, this attack they are doing is seriously illegal and they shouldn't get away with it :)
teeta chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Rika, or rather anonymous. Do you take me for someone stupid? I knew exactly it was you, who else would leave a message that said more than I revealed in my announcement? I will not have your rubbish here, and you know what I think of you? You're a coward and a bully and as YOU could see, none of other readers agrees with your methods. Just the opposite.
Rika chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
so i saw you deleted my comment. so desperate to hide people that disagree with you? hence why i lost all respect.
CemeteryLight chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
I'm so sorry that that happened to you!

..I'm really sad, I was in the middle of reading this and I was almost done!

When you figure out a way for people to read it, I'd love to know DXXX. (I'll probably check back here, obviously, so I'm not asking you to message me or anything.)

Damn, I really wanted to know what happens :(

Anyway, thanks so much for writing it XD I was really enjoying it.
Lykan chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
That's just . . . wow. Nothing makes me madder than someone completely defacing an authors work. I loved this story, it was wonderful! I usually wait till the last chapter posted to review, but I didn't even get that far, thanks to this jerk. Don't give up hope! Keep writing, you've got way too much talent to waste it because of this idiot! I agree with everyone else, when you find a way to re-publish NST, let us know!

Symbiotik chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
I'm so sorry to hear that some people can not be respectful towards the creativity of an author. [ I'm really upset that I can longer go back and re-read all the amazingness, but I definitely understand your decision.

And hopefully, in the near-by future you'll find a solution!

Keep being amazing!

A devoted, yet sane and respectful reader.
Pernicia chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
With so many devout readers, it's hard to believe one reader could have such a devastating effect. And such bad timing too- I was just about to reread and review this fic, which I'd read last summer before I had an account. (Besides, I like to read fics through before offering advice, so I can see how everything contributes to the big picture.) Even though the big picture is gone, I'll try to critique what I remember.

Uri: an adorable, confused half boy, half man. He's imperfect (AKA oblivious), which makes him particularly endearing. I'm sorry I can't cite specific instances (hopefully when this is reposted elsewhere, I can review in more detail). I do remember randomly wondering if Uri could drive- since in the US, we can drive when we turn sixteen. And whatever happened to Dan/Nancy- not that I don't like the Dan/Rane pairing better, I was just curious. Or maybe that was covered and I'm just forgetting.

Shawn: my favorite character, dark yet heroic. While Uri is open yet oblivious, Shawn is his perfect foil: closed yet teeming with knowledge, of his true parents, for example. I loved his background, and while I didn't love the attempted rape (since rape is terrible in reality), I felt it added depth to his character. The suicide attempt, while also horrible in reality, was one of my favorite parts. Which is why I was so excited to read about his recovery and the boys' eventual revelation to their parents. (Some day, I still hope to.)

Without the text, I can't micro analyze each chapter, but I remember one suggestion I was going to make was that the Rane/Uri sex scenes be shortened, since some parts were a bit long without adding much to the story. Now that I've read more smut scenes, I don't know if I'd say the same thing. If you repost, I'll see if I'm just not remembering right.

Let's see... there were lots of little parts I loved... Skipping Beauty, the picture of a cactus Uri sent... That I remember this stuff at all after not reading this story for over a year proves your story certainly was memorable! I was going to recommend you get it published, but that seems to be quite the issue right now...

While we're on that thread of thought: whoever did this has no authority whatsoever to copy this. I'm pretty sure if you look in the fiction press Terms of Service, you'll find that what they're doing is illegal. And, to be honest, immature. I sincerely hope you resolve this crisis, and even more so, that you'll let all of us know where and when you intend to republish this. I'm hoping you can put it back on fiction press eventually so that I can review it, but if not, let me just say this was one of the first fics I read and to this day, it remains one of my favorite, even if only the first chapter remains. Please please please keep us up to date! I can't wait to reread this! And feel free to PM. (Especially if it comes with a scene from the story- okay, I'll stop begging now before I start sounding like an addict.)
Princess Teska chapter 2 . 7/31/2011

Gah, I can't stand not knowing the end of stories, it drives me crazy .

Please let us know if you decide to post it somewhere else? I need to know what happens! It was one of my favorite stories ever! D:
animelover2day chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
This saddens me greatly, but I understand why you had to do what you did. Please don't stop writing this wonderful story and I hope you give us a link to the new site you might be putting it on. You could maybe make your own site with a password and only give out the password to people you trust. That's what someone I knew had to do, because people kept on stealing her work. People have to ask her personally for a password. And having her own site has helped. Hope my suggestion helped. Whenever you decide to do whatever needs to be done, post it on your profile or in a new chapter if possible. I seriously want to be kept informed.
birdshitftw chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
Wow, I literally just reread all of the chapters of Not Supposed To just the other day, and I'm glad I did! I'm so sorry you have to deal with copyright issues...I can only imagine what it must feel like to have your original ideas threatened like that. I'm sad to see this wonderful story go, but I just wanted to say that your loyal readers won't blame you at all for this decision.

Also, if you ever resolve the issue/find away to publish NST, will you update it in the story so we can be notified? I'd like to be able to read it again/purchase the story if you ever found a way :)
UnluckyShyGirl chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
I love this story :( it's such a shame these selfish people have to ruin this for everyone, I hope you're able to upload this somewhere else and good luck!
Senfree chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
Is there any way that we will be able to read the newest chapters? Because if you get them out on Ebooks I'll never, ever be able to read them. I can't afford Ebook. D: I wish they would have just left your stories alone. ]:

This is my favorite story, ever, more than any story I've ever read. It's been my inspiration. I understand what you are doing though. I would have reacted the same way. Thank you for letting me meet Uri and Shawn. o:
Wabisuke chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
Wow. Losers? Talk about absolutely zero respect for a writer.

...I understand your decision. Is it possible that you're going to put NST up on this paid website? D:... if so, I'll definitely have to work up the funds to get on there and read it. I can't go on not knowing what happens.

What you could do with the future chapters if you don't plan on adding it to the paid site, is use google documents to publish it, and that way only people you give the link to would be able to see it. Though... that might be more trouble than it's worth considering all the people that want to read it.

Anyway, just throwing things out there! I'm sure there are other/better ways to password protect things like this too. I really hope you come up with something, and good luck writing as always!
AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
That is ridiculous! What the hell! RAWR! I can't believe some people! I'm sorry this happened and I really hope you can repost this else where! I love this story so much... If you do find a safe place to repost please send me a link. I've waited what seems like forever for your updates so I'll be waiting for it, even if it takes an eternity and i forget everything about it! Haha! I'll just reread it all the way from the beginning! Good luck and I hope to hear from you soon! :)
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