Reviews for Failed
Ravenna1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2002
HOw true
Neesh chapter 1 . 4/14/2002
OMG! IT'S MY FRIEND BEN! IT'S EXACTLY BEN! and uh...lil me... .;; BUT OMG!
Mystik-chan chapter 1 . 9/24/2001
That peice of poetry has a truth to it actually. Nobody can be perfect. But your best usually can carry you through. Your poem was good none the less.
AsianScaper chapter 1 . 6/10/2001
The honesty...and the complete disregard for what other peoplet think has absolutely pulled up my opinion of you. Writing is therapeutic and honestly, I experience the same things you do. I draw and though I'm very bad at it, I TRY...and most of the time, simply doing my best isn't good enough. Perfection is the light in the heavens that we would never in this world. But we hope and dream, and strive for things that cannot be. What comfort could I give you but the knowledge of my own failings? ) Smiles for a poet who hopes...and still dreams.
Jessica R Vance chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
;_; That's so sad! But a great poem!